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The second-largest Hawaiian island, Maui is a tropical paradise teeming with waving palms and turquoise waters rich with pristine reefs perfect for spending endless afternoons snorkeling.
Whether watching the sun rise from Haleakala Crater or swimming beneath waterfalls, Maui is the premiere destination for relaxing, unwinding and exploring some of the most breathtaking sites in the world.
Things to Do When You Get There
There’s plenty to experience on the magical island of Maui. Start with a drive along the Hana Highway and stop by Haleakala National Park, home to the island’s highest peak, volcanic Haleakala. Follow the signs pointing to the warm, natural pools and waterfalls of Ohe’s Gulch to engage with nature’s wonder.
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